Adjusting the Hospital Sound (Rough Cut 2)

I have experimented with the hospital sound in this quick rough cut to see how I might like it in my final version. I tried it running through the whole opening, just getting quieter in the flashbacks. I think it works as it keeps the clinical, hospital feel going throughout the opening which keeps the story rooted in reality with flashbacks in-between. It also makes the whole thing feel less disjointed as there's this continuous sound running all the way through. However, I might not need this once I have my underscore.
I also added some beeps over the title to indicate how Emma has woken up and her heart is working again. It links the video back to the beginning to give it a better feeling of cohesion. However, I don't know if it might be a bit confusing for the audience if they think the scene actually has gone back to the start. To find out I am going to sow this rough cut to some members of my target audience and ask them what they think.